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..::Thomz::..
Fatal Scriptures - Mercenary
Joined: 31 May 2006
Posts: 71
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Sun Jun 04, 2006 8:58 am |
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BATTLE RULES:
One Round
*24 Lines MAX....
Four votes wins
3-0 KO
EXPLAINED VOTES ONLY!!!!
No Crew Votes, Dick Riding, Hate Votes
Criticism/Feedback is always welcomed
NO FREE POSTING!!!
VOTES ARE TO BASED ON:
Metas
Multis
Creativity
Wordplay
Consistency
Punches
Personals
Flow
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..::Thomz::..
Fatal Scriptures - Mercenary
Joined: 31 May 2006
Posts: 71
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Thu Jun 22, 2006 7:05 pm |
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JayT's verse
Fatal Scriptures' my team, running the 'Click with effervescence
Zimbabwe lacks defenses, inhales his last breath like Evanesecence.
When the pen sets, on loose leaf, i prove leaps and bounds beyond
Keepin sound strong, enough to knock you off the cloud you're on.
People criticizing me for being technical with funk.
For Zim to beat me, i'd have to be on an episode of Punk'd.
Breakin' it down for laymen, from the Bricks to Islands, Cayman.
My flows break limbs and leave you applying for Rayman.
While I check your chick, inject dick, till her ribs notarized.
You need a bib, darlin, the semen keeps her lips moisturized.
you're not fucking with Jay, Zim, you're a nun in a convent,
A neuterized labrodor, wanting none of the concept.
Dope flows, text or audio, spittin on floors for janitors
Think you terra firm? This leviathan will make you sub-mariner.
no need to explain shit with asteriks and liner notes
if people don't get it then they lost, like the Niners, folks.
My crew runs deep, like Mr. Smith in Matrix flicks
You mad cause you couldn't get a crew, if you paid for it.
Global Cypher was a joke, but THIS..is Seinfeld hilarious.
You need to stop your parody of rhyme and get vicarious.
Live through the scriptures enveloped by the Phenomenal.
This battle was over, ever since Thomz typed the nominals.
Spittin the rhythmitical since umbilical was hacked to turf.
Smacked this blue balled smurf, leave him looking like afterbirth |
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jayt11
Fatal Scriptures - Mercenary
Joined: 10 Jun 2006
Posts: 19
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Sat Jun 24, 2006 2:05 pm |
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still no word from Zim? dog went MIA. |
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Catastrophe
Fatal Scriptures - Mercenary
Joined: 09 Mar 2006
Posts: 139
Location: Atlanta, Ga.
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Fri Jun 30, 2006 3:56 pm |
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Fatal Scriptures' my team, running the 'Click with effervescence
Zimbabwe lacks defenses, inhales his last breath like Evanesecence.
When the pen sets, on loose leaf, i prove leaps and bounds beyond
For Zim to beat me, i'd have to be on an episode of Punk'd.
While I check your chick, inject dick, till her ribs notarized.
You need a bib, darlin, the semen keeps her lips moisturized.
you're not fucking with Jay, Zim, you're a nun in a convent,
A neuterized labrodor, wanting none of the concept.
Live through the scriptures enveloped by the Phenomenal.
This battle was over, ever since Thomz typed the nominals.
Spittin the rhythmitical since umbilical was hacked to turf.
Smacked this blue balled smurf, leave him looking like afterbirth
good verse jay.......too bad it was wasted. |
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jayt11
Fatal Scriptures - Mercenary
Joined: 10 Jun 2006
Posts: 19
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Sun Jul 02, 2006 1:37 pm |
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not yet |
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..::Thomz::..
Fatal Scriptures - Mercenary
Joined: 31 May 2006
Posts: 71
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Mon Jul 03, 2006 4:59 am |
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Zim's late verse....do wit it what u will
jay-t its on,,best sneak into a dentists surgey and [b]brace yourself[/b]
u couldnt win a battle if i folded yo head in half and made u face yourself
u granny watching goat porn addict thats right i looked up your bills
boost mobile sayd u calld the fishing store trynna get [b]hooked up wit skills[/b]
I GOT u niggas digging ma shit like this was a poo mine
talkin all thuggish u fuckin wit ma minutes thats only occasion u do time
u best be taking this shit in lke the incompitent asshole u are (incompetent assshole--ashoole doin the rong thing/takin shit in)
im the saviour here 2 put a lid on yo can b4 this trash gets too far
u dead meat u can jus eat yoself & stop askin the goverment 2 get u food
ma rhymes is equal 2 yo rhymes to the power of three ull end up in a coffin box nigga ill get u cubed
illeterate nigga dont kno his alfabet couldnt get past "B" now u think u a wizard of words well lets C
ima thro peices of yo body in a sea of yo blood sho u who rele parted the red sea
aint even readin yo shit afta i post jus leave yo brain soft like foutons(matresses)
i have yo mom payin 4 yo coffin in governement welfare food coupons
nigga u aint real jus an actor addicted 2 drama well fool this plays ova
nigga u couldnt cross me ifi crusified u and changed yo name 2 JAY-HOVA |
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intel
Young'n
Joined: 07 Jun 2006
Posts: 25
Location: BOSTON , phx occasionally
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Mon Jul 03, 2006 6:37 am |
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EXTREMELY HARD opening! ..... very nice zim... but yea.. |
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COG
Young'n
Joined: 16 Jun 2006
Posts: 2
Location: Your Eyebrow
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Mon Jul 03, 2006 8:00 am |
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Zim, u cud have put up a good fight if ya verse came in early enuff.
Tight shit dawg - u ripped!!!
Peace. |
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jayt11
Fatal Scriptures - Mercenary
Joined: 10 Jun 2006
Posts: 19
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Mon Jul 03, 2006 1:44 pm |
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um, Zim was never a no-show in the first place. I told yah he would drop his verse cause i spoke to him after meddal tried to up his 12th man status. |
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jayt11
Fatal Scriptures - Mercenary
Joined: 10 Jun 2006
Posts: 19
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Thu Jul 06, 2006 12:15 am |
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VOTE!!!!!!! |
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